Dark_Wings
 Number of posts : 60
Registration date : 2007-08-20
 | Subject: A Poem  Wed Aug 22, 2007 5:51 pm | |
| She waits for the day he'll feel the same way
When will it come or will she wait forever never to live
Perhaps she should tell him or he may never figure it out
But with the outcome unknown she fears the results
Would he accept or regect
Depending on the answer it could be her last breath
Away it will go with her broken heart
Taken away by the one who'll never know
Will he make it in time or will she already be gone along with her heart never to be repaired | |
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ya-tebya-liubliu
Number of posts : 247
Age : 34
Location : Kontich, Belgium
Registration date : 2007-08-07
| | Subject: Re: A Poem Thu Aug 23, 2007 5:27 am | |
| this is just wow DW, has a lot of emotions in it... | |
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Dark_Wings
Number of posts : 60
Registration date : 2007-08-20
| | Subject: Re: A Poem Thu Aug 23, 2007 3:12 pm | |
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ForsakenAngel
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Number of posts : 84
Age : 31
Location : Stoke, England
Registration date : 2007-08-07
| | Subject: Re: A Poem Mon Sep 03, 2007 7:32 am | |
| *takes a deep breath* Her heart is hollow, For her love has gone, He took her passion, He did what he thought should be done. But she can't see that, Through her pain and despair, She feels she can never love again, And she does not care. ok  *hides* | |
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ya-tebya-liubliu
Number of posts : 247
Age : 34
Location : Kontich, Belgium
Registration date : 2007-08-07
| | Subject: Re: A Poem Mon Sep 03, 2007 9:41 am | |
| no need to hide Hollie, it's a great one... | |
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ForsakenAngel
Admin
Number of posts : 84
Age : 31
Location : Stoke, England
Registration date : 2007-08-07
| | Subject: Re: A Poem Mon Sep 03, 2007 12:25 pm | |
| mmm....yeah it was ok for something i just came up with | |
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